otuha's toa of art comic!!

[ferimi]

ok, guys otuha put this comic about ToA together and I wanted to post it on here since he's busy with his site.
here's the link
the pics are very large so I'm not going to post them here.

[otuha]

well, thanks for puting it up for me .but the pics aren't all colored yet.
I wanted to finish them up on the computer first before I posted them.
oh,well the story is done and that's all that matters I guess.
~otuha

[Tavu]

[glow=red,2,300]I voted great. The pictures were really good. The writing was okay. I think the art is better though.

Tavu[/glow]

[IceCoolToa]

[glow=orange,2,300]Tis quite good! I also like the detail on the Ata.[/glow] [/color]

[otuha]

thank you for your opinions I thought that this was just going to be a waste of bandwidth since no one posted for so long.
~otuha

[Toa of Art]

Sorry for not posting earlier but I wanted to wait for the full colored version...

I think the comic looks nice, though the pencil-coloring is a little light
The story-line seems good, I only think you might make the comic a little longer

I also like that you put me in the credits

ToA

[otuha]

Toa said:

Sorry for not posting earlier but I wanted to wait for the full colored version...

I think the comic looks nice, though the pencil-coloring is a little light
The story-line seems good, I only think you might make the comic a little longer

I also like that you put me in the credits

ToA

you wanted it longer?
darn ,I actually added some pages to it after the credits.
I'll color it but I won't add any more pages since the storyline has very little to do with the actual story of ToA.
the coloring will be finished sooner or later...I've been kinda busy with my nui's and my website: www.rcindustries.tk/ which is based on my expanded universe of bionicle.it's also the home domain of my moc-building group"RCIndustries"
~otuha